Tuesday, March 4, 2008
Thoughtshot[Describe A Place]
Walking onto the golden platform raised a million feet above the water I stood there looking at the money green grass. The buildings surrounded me glittering and shining so bright. Their brightness jumped at me with open arms. The falling of the water came rushing down like gold pouring out of a mine. There are people all around snapping pictures here and there, the flashes seem to be contagious. The people are talking uncontrollably speaking in American and French and they seem to yelling exciting comments. The colors of the jackets are bright blue, everything almost stands like party decorations. The excitment on all the little kids faces glows with laughter and joy. Walking down the the stairway towards the loud up roar of water, glistening drops falls beside me but, not yet touching me. Suddenly the crowd edges closer to the water, one by one we all way through the never ending water fall. It's my turn finally, I walk through the water and at that time the water seems to of hit me the hardest. Laughter came from the happy crowd and smiles were brightened when I walked out. Finally returning to the gigantic grey building towels were handed caringly to everyone. Boxed lunches were set out for the crowd, my box was the first box, set the prettiest and with the boldest name. There was never any silence, the sound of water constantly running rang in my ears. The sky never turned grey that day, just bright blue skies with not a cloud in site. Everything seemed to shine like it hadn't before, even the boats in the water glistened as they floated. This was the greatest day.
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